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A vermilion-hued gorgeous dawn, wake up with cooing bird-songs - the most delightful   scintillating melody in the world... touching the senses with their crooning and chirping to each other, inviting friends and lovers to join the sonata of celebration -                           Spring has arrived! when I stroll on the jade sandy beach of a vast ocean, the emerald waves rolling away lapping at my feet, the deep sonorous music of the water takes my breath away - the conch, the shells,the wind - all imbibe the music from far, and join in the same mystifying                         chorus!  a sublime symphony of chimes rises from the jingling bells of a temple... serenades to hills and dales!   evening dawns, glimmering  last rays of setting sun create a painting in the sapphire ocean, the refrain transfers us to another world, where all sorrows are forgotten, weaving                a tapestry of chants ! March 20, 2023 Writing Challenge - "M" words Poetry Contest Theme: Music Sponsor: Constance La France FIRST PLACE

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Date: 4/6/2023 4:14:00 PM
A "sonata of celebration" indeed dear friend as you take us on a morning walk through waves, bird songs, and a "vermillion" sunrise. Your images are so crisp and dynamic I can hear the waves, the chimes and feel the vermillion! You have such a gift for using color to carry the mood of your poems. It is so wonderful to have you back in the soup! A true joy! Blessings dear friend. Easter joy of Alleluia to you!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/7/2023 2:39:00 PM
Dear Sam, it is such a joy to receive your comments. We are fortunate indeed, to have supporting friends - I almost float in cloud nine after receiving such beautiful messages. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Date: 4/3/2023 4:58:00 AM
Mala, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/28/2023 6:48:00 PM
such spectacular beauty in every word dear friend, a winner 1st place, congrats, well done
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Date: 3/22/2023 7:34:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this melodious muse of yours. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 3/21/2023 10:00:00 AM
What a lovely melody your words and images weave dear friend highlighting the soothing effects of music in the depths of our souls! As always, I am carried away by the rainbow palette your words paint with creating a gossamer rainbow of images. So wonderful to have you back "in the soup!" Congratulations dear Mala! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 3/21/2023 9:53:00 AM
Nature's music, what a lovely take on your theme with beautiful descriptions. Well done
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Date: 3/21/2023 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 3/21/2023 9:17:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Mala :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/21/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise! Appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/21/2023 9:15:00 AM
"crooning and chirping", "emerald waves", " sonorous music of the water", and " serenades to hills and dales" - Great work, indeed! Congratulations! My mail to you is pending. Contacting you soon.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/21/2023 9:28:00 AM
Sure. Email me.
Date: 3/21/2023 7:20:00 AM
Sonata of celebrations - love it Mala. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/21/2023 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. Music is my love! There is nothing like music in nature!
Date: 3/20/2023 2:23:00 PM
Hello Mala, bkrds singing is music to my ears. The ocean, river, stream, lakes. are also music to my ears. Love & friendship, Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2023 11:05:00 AM
Hello Mala, yes I enjoy to watch nature. I watch the squirrels every day. they chase each other for the peanuts. The Blue Jays do not have a chance. Love 7 Friendship /Darlene/
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/20/2023 2:48:00 PM
Dear Darlene, Thank you so much for your visit, and the lovely comment. I know how much you love watching Nature - I do that too.
Date: 3/20/2023 12:22:00 PM
- Beautiful color and lovely music in this wonderful spring poem ... a poem that brings joy, Mala - I hope you get a top win, good luck :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/20/2023 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Really appreciate your kindest comment.

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