Musette Moon

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27771055 - bedroom with moonlight and smoke - Advanced Sleep ...

breath, gone you drip moonlight blue, wan ... thru shades - skin and tresses soft braids cede sleep limbs and percale swim ... deep. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Finding Your Musette" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor.

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Lonna Blodgett

Date: 4/18/2020 11:35:00 AM

This form is difficult to convey but your words are like magic words that take us straight to slumber. Love this

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/18/2020 10:25:00 AM

This is a fantastic creative write. Wow, This is a fav for me. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

David Mohn

Date: 4/16/2020 9:23:00 PM

This is wonderful Greg…I was wondering if someone could actually create a mood in this restrictive form…you certainly did.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2020 5:16:00 PM

I think yours might be one of the few that truly read like POETRY in this restrictive form. So beautiful this is, Greg. Way to go on your well deserved first placement.

John Watt

Date: 4/16/2020 10:23:00 AM

Greg, this is just awesome, and deserves the #1 placement you received. I think you should do more in this form! Your excellent vocabulary lends itself well to the 'less is more' style. Well done!

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/16/2020 6:18:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. Delighted am I with these three lines: "cede sleep limbs and percale swim ... deep." God bless you.

Joseph May

Date: 4/15/2020 6:27:00 PM

Very nicely done Greg, Congrats on your win

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/15/2020 6:48:00 PM

Oh my goodness - what an awesome surprise! Thank you so much, Joseph, this really means a lot - I wasn't sure where to take this, but it was a really fun form, and this made my day. Many thanks and blessings to you - I pray you and yours are safe and sound! :o)