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Muse On the Loose

Once you are in love With your fond muse On the slightest ruse She’ll get you above To ornate emptiness Of aesthetic in grace Seeking exclusively Worded art in a glee Views red and white Word loud and quiet Image blue and pink Rainbows for the ink Your mundaneness Of the gun and fun Will lose the cages Under the cold sun Unruffled you’ll see She makes you airy You’ll feel the stone Gone from the lone Soul, you’re reborn With rose and thorn Tremors in neurons Get rhododendrons The exciting flowers Your creative hours The single malt fine Taking to cloud nine What a lovely refuge Embracing my muse _________________ 4/9/2016

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Date: 9/12/2016 2:05:00 AM
Very interesting shape to this poem. How did you do it? Good luck in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/12/2016 5:07:00 AM
Why, just went on writing on the screen in short lines, then noticed the symmetry in the shape, was conscious, tried to keep the lines of same length , this much , ... Anyway, thank you for noticing and liking ...
Date: 9/9/2016 6:35:00 AM
A nice tribute to your muse, Mr. Prabir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/9/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/4/2016 2:02:00 PM
Yes Probir, our muses can be wonderful at times and others quite aggravating. I enjoyed reading about yours:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/5/2016 5:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/4/2016 12:27:00 PM
this is nice, probir. I have no idea if he actually means for us to write about our muse or about anything we want, but i enjoyed this sample of how a poet has interpreted the challenge!! WEll done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/5/2016 5:26:00 AM
I am honoured Andrea ... Your appreciation is encouraging ...

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