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Shall I collect the petals as they fall As you pluck them, leaving a fragrant scent Will you smile, if I can gather them all And give them to you, a lover's present This field of spring covered in soft clover Painted by the sun with its purest light Showing new vistas as shades cross over Covering petals of scented delight Waves of moving grass across lush meadows A rolling west wind arrives as we lay Large birds glide higher becoming shadows As they follow sunlight floating away And though the petals fell they did not land Between us they stayed, still safe in my hand for the contest Be My Reason sponsored by Amy Green

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Date: 3/21/2014 1:53:00 PM
You are using fascinating metaphors in this work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/21/2014 3:12:00 PM
thank you Matthew for your kindness
Date: 3/20/2014 1:31:00 PM
Beautiful imagery within these lines, wonderful write! Congrats on the win:)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/21/2014 3:11:00 PM
thank you Amanda for your kindness
Date: 3/10/2014 6:43:00 PM
now this would inspire. congrads. john
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 6:46:00 PM
thank you John for your kindness
Date: 3/10/2014 5:07:00 AM
Very inspirational write. Congrats on the fine win, Frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram for your kindness
Date: 3/9/2014 2:42:00 PM
- Oh ... a beautiful and romantic winning poem!! - Well deserved, a pleasure to read. - Congratulations on a great 2 place in the contest, Frederic!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thank you my poetic friend for reading and for your kindness
Date: 3/9/2014 2:31:00 PM
A beautiful, quite romantic write Frederic. Not to mention, inspiring. Congrats! Peace. :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 2:30:00 PM
Peace Robert and thank you for your kindness
Date: 3/9/2014 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful and congratulations on the win Frederic... Verlena
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 2:31:00 PM
Thank you for reading and your kindness
Date: 3/3/2014 10:33:00 PM
Hello Frederic, congratulations on the PM, have fun and enjoy the many features that come along with the PM. Please invite me over when you post your first blog. This is a gift from the Poet Destroyer and SKAT :) have a nice day and enjoy. SKAT
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/4/2014 5:44:00 PM
Thank you again and thank poet destroyer, I wll enjoy it
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Skat A
Date: 3/3/2014 10:34:00 PM
A lovely poem and reason. The best of luck in Amy's contest.
Date: 3/3/2014 7:02:00 PM
Such eloquence. Be still my heart!!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/3/2014 8:08:00 PM
thank you my poetic friend
Date: 3/3/2014 2:53:00 PM
Amy should like this one because I like it. It is very descriptive with good rhyming included.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/3/2014 8:06:00 PM
thanks robert for your kindness

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