Muse-Ic

You inspired me to scribble on paper with ink Telling me never to think About what to say so with that no heavy burden does my pen write Clear of head clear of heart clear with bliss does my hand do part No thought of hand or brain may see again my hand goes back to thee A new muse have I sought With each and every word I am taught A new lesson a skill if you must Happy I listened for my hand did trust I wrote for days into nights it seems Not quite sure what was real or just dreams Inspired by Muse and Music

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/15/2016 12:31:00 AM

Your title brought me and your talent kept me

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/17/2016 1:00:00 AM

You're always welcome.........

Jai Bankson
Date: 6/15/2016 11:06:00 PM

Many thanks!Look forward to reading your work,Take care,Jai

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/5/2016 3:46:00 AM

This was quite free-flowing, Jai. Interesting write, and I am happy to see your muse is at work! Beautiful job. Always, Laura

Jai Bankson
Date: 4/5/2016 10:04:00 AM

I appreciate that very much! Jai

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/2/2016 8:21:00 PM

Another good poem (and fun wordplay in your title). Our muse really is like someone taking complete control over you ... rarely is it difficult, but nearly always free-flowing. You write well on this topic.

Jai Bankson
Date: 4/5/2016 12:37:00 AM

Appreciate that Timothy.When it is difficult I throw it away...Maybe good,maybe bad----It should --Must flow free!!!!!!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/1/2016 2:56:00 AM

Clever title; Love how you have played with the idea and the flow of it...into dreams. SuZ

Jai Bankson
Date: 4/5/2016 12:38:00 AM

Thank you very much Suzy Q!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 7:38:00 PM

Ha, I like the double transaction. I wish I was hit with the both at the same time. My muse and music. However, Justin to be honest, I don't have a muse. Music is distracting. I tried it a few times and i was lost into the music instead. I envy you. Love LINDA

Jai Bankson
Date: 4/5/2016 12:44:00 AM

I haven't been envied in awhile..The trick is to not know the lyrics..HaHA,,Try SilverSun or Prestor Jon--I can't write without music screaming...To each their own..Seriously.check out Prestor Jon for me...You will love the drummer.