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Murmurs of My Heart

Icy rain pounding the glass ~ like a beating drum

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Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 7/16/2023 5:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ...Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my icy rain write. Have a great day writing away................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2023 2:23:00 PM

"1 Place" ~ Murmurs Of My Heart~Date Written:7/6/2023

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/15/2023 12:30:00 PM

Very nicely written. Your simile is top notch, Paula, as you've linked 3 rumbling sounds - the heart, the rain, and the tap, tap, tapping drum. Excellent! Congratulations! Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:49:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. I see Excellent??? Thanks, that made my day. Have a great day writing away................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:49:00 AM

Great scene and word painting. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:46:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my painting with words. Have a great day writing away................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/13/2023 9:25:00 PM

Yeah, I can imagine that...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:44:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you can imagine my icy rain write. Have a great day writing away................

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/9/2023 5:02:00 PM

Reminds me of my childhood and the old farmhouse we lived in during winter. God bless....

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Hope your childhood and the old farmhouse were good memories. Have a great day writing away................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2023 9:10:00 PM

So many places that I, your reader, can take this. Love these kind of writes. Thank you, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2023 9:14:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love my write. I love writing in the Monoku style. I find them to be fun to write. Have a great day writing away.................

Katharine L. Sparrow

Date: 7/8/2023 7:38:00 PM

it's a lovely noise, if you're going to sleep! but I don't want to think of icy rain now, I love SUMMER!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2023 9:11:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Icy Rain write. I also enjoy Summer. Winter will be here soon enough. Have a great day writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2023 7:53:00 AM

- A good one, Paula ... don't wake me up at night with such drums :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2023 3:05:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your luck. Glad you like this Icy Rain write. I will let you sleep. Hugs... Have a great day writing away.................

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 7/7/2023 12:04:00 AM

A good description. Well done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2023 3:03:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away.................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2023 9:12:00 PM

You must love a rainy day!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2023 2:58:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Yes, I love to hear the rain. Have a great day writing away.................

Deb M

Date: 7/6/2023 4:34:00 PM

Paula l love the title and l love the poem….l love the rain also so can relate! This comment is all about l love haha! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2023 3:01:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write/title/rain. What a fun rainy day/night it can be. Have a great day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2023 3:22:00 PM

Murmurs Of My Heart~Date Written:7/6/2023