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Murmurs

I gather in the scarred and broken forms, the lipped imperfections that score the wind to give voice to an evening. I see through the lesions that open to a stillness into which the universe whispers its unfolding. I feel the awe, the sheer enormity that confronts the senses as all that is opens into endlessness, the mind wilting at its door, leaving only these hands to shape offerings which, like shells held to an ear, echo only the faint murmurs of what cannot be contained.

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Date: 5/11/2023 11:10:00 PM
I too love that second stanza Paul! Belated congrats on a well deserved POTD!:-) hugs jan xx
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/12/2023 12:15:00 AM
Thankyou Jan, very much appreciate your comments. Happy the second stanza connected and was rewarded by a hug...treasured. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 6:46:00 PM
Like 'shape offerings,' words 'cannot be contained.' There's something magical about that, when viewed in an artist way. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/12/2023 12:10:00 AM
So pleased Brandy that you invited my little poem into your mind for a visit, thankyou for your generous words. Glad that I was a gentle visitor. Value your comments. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 5:12:00 PM
Lovely to see your name and wonderful poem up here Paul…..Congratulations…Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/12/2023 12:05:00 AM
Thankyou Deb, very much appreciate your kind words and support. Somewhat surprised but feel honoured by the POTD recognition.
Date: 5/11/2023 12:58:00 PM
Excellent POTD . Congratulations :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 4:26:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Heidi...thankyou for your time and support. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 11:59:00 AM
Lovely write. Deserves POTD.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 4:24:00 PM
Thankyou Jay...apreciate your kind words. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 11:08:00 AM
Wow! Paul. This is fascinating. I'm wondering about those "lipped imperfections that score the wind"...Congrats on POTD, by the way.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Jim for your kind words. Very much appreciated. As for the "lipped imperfections"....came out of the subconscious but probably a reference to the spoken word in poetry as the first stanza is about how poetry, as with any art form, with all of its imperfections, can take us to the edge of mystery, the sublime, but cannot contain it. It is beyond the imperfections and limitations of language. Probably said too much. Value your comments, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 10:33:00 AM
Well, congratulations! Obviously I thought you should be poem of the day every time you posted :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 4:02:00 PM
A big thankyou DD for your unwavering support, your kindness is valued along with all the time you have given in reading through my poems. Your encouragement matters. Keep well, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Paul. Simply beautiful. :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:40:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Fin. Pleased that you found something in the poem....matters to me. Thankyou, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 9:23:00 AM
Paul, a beautifully penned poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:36:00 PM
Thankyou Constance, your comments very much appreciated and valued. I was very surprised with the POTD honor, I have never had so many kind souls offer me such supportive comments. Overwhelmed a bit. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 9:14:00 AM
Paul, your poetry is exceptional. I Faved this delectable morsel and am now following you for more. Congratulations on your Poem of the Day!
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:32:00 PM
Thankyou Mark for your positive comments, I blush. Indeed appreciate your kind words and the time you spent with the poem. The words from a fellow poet matter....take care, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day..............
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Paula for stopping by my poem and taking the time to send me your comments. Very much appreciated...Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD,Paul! Very insightful and deeply thought-provoking poetry. Thanks for giving our minds something to contemplate. A poet friend in Texas, Bill p.s. A FAV for my list!
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Bill for your comments, too kind. Pleased that you gave your time to the poem, very much valued. Always a nice feeling to receive such encouraging words. Take care, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Paul! Very nice!
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:15:00 PM
Thankyou Kim. Very much appreciate your time and support, valued. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 6:36:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful in its nuances and emotions dear Paul ! Amazing words from your gifted pen . Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:13:00 PM
Thankyou Susan for your lovely words and encouragement. Pleased that the poem landed softly....value your comments. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 6:01:00 AM
Looks like you have found your groove, Paul. Congratulations on POTD. I am so happy for you. Now others will see what an excellent writer you are:) A pleasure to read you this morning my friend.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:11:00 PM
Daniel, so appreciative of your support and encouragement, you have been a true friend and given me a lift when sometimes I needed it. Thankyou, you have exhibited what is good about PS. Take care mate, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 5:12:00 AM
that opening couplet.....will keep me pondering all day...combined with the fan couplet....damn!! that could stand on its own.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 3:04:00 PM
Feel honoured that you will ponder those lines John...your support and kind words very much valued. Take care, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 4:50:00 AM
Stellar, Paul! Congrats on potd! Best, John
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 2:59:00 PM
Thanks John , appreciate your time and kind words. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 4:20:00 AM
Hello Paul, Congratulation on the POTD Enjoy yt9ur day. Your friend /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2023 10:42:00 AM
Hello Paul, Paul you are welcome. I enjoyed to read this poewm. Enjoy your day. My friend./Darlene\
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Darlene for your kind words and time...very much appreciated. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 4:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your awesome p.o.t.d., Paul :) -
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 2:52:00 PM
Very much appreciate your comments and spending a little time with the poem. Thankyou...valued. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 3:35:00 AM
Paul, congratulations on having this one chosen as poem of the day. My wish will come to fruition.
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/11/2023 5:39:00 PM
That’s very kind of you, Paul, but your poetic skill needs no advertising. ;-)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 2:49:00 PM
Lin, your support and kindness very much valued. I have no doubt the vibes you sent out had a substantial influence and for this I am grateful...thankyou. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 3:30:00 AM
Paul, a superb poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 2:45:00 PM
Very much appreciate receiving your comments and support Tania. Thankyou, Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 2:17:00 AM
Amazing! Congrats on POTD, Paul ~ a fav
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 2:43:00 PM
Thankyou....your comments are valued and very much appreciated. Paul
Date: 5/11/2023 1:21:00 AM
Amazing writing. LOVE This so. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2023 2:41:00 PM
Thankyou for your kind and encouraging words Gina, very much appreciated. Paul
Date: 5/10/2023 8:30:00 AM
I can resonate with these lines 'like shells held to an ear, echo only the faint murmurs of what cannot be contained.'. I always look forward to reading your poems
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2023 4:45:00 PM
Thanks DD....your kind words always a welcomed gift.
Date: 5/10/2023 7:26:00 AM
So many of your phrases are awesome, Paul, especially in your second stanza. "... mind wilting at the door," and "faint murmurs of what cannot be contained." I wish more poets here would read the talent I find in your poetry. I'm faving this one.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2023 4:27:00 PM
Thankyou Lin for your comments, so kind of you to provide such positive feedback. Quite honoured. It's good to know that a little of what was put into the poem manages to find an appreciative ear....yr comments valued.

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