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Murder Scam

At serialkiller.com I found someone to kill my mom Murder for hire So I pay them five thousand bucks Next thing I know I'm in handcuffs Murder backfired! 8/1/11

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/15/2012 2:35:00 PM

You gotta love Poetic Justice! This is funny Susan.

Danny Stinson

Date: 11/19/2011 7:17:00 PM

I'm always a sucker for sardonic humor. Keep it up!

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/4/2011 5:50:00 PM

haha! backatcha on the blunt preeshin' thing! ~N

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 12:48:00 PM

Susan, this sounds like just desserts on a wicked guy. haha. I have to remind myself what tail rhyme was. I think I know what you are asking. How to get the perfect rhyme of not putting ed on the last word? Hmmm, one to think on! That is the bad thing about rhyming. We have to think too hard. If that was your question, well the more I think on it, I don't think you can say it any other way. LEt me know if it was something else you questioned!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/31/2011 9:38:00 AM

hahah, murder backfired, nice but bitter humor, Susan