Get Your Premium Membership

Murder of the Soul

Why would he choose a blue rose? Heaven it's sickly color I will pretend it's pretty For our anniversary Oh! I understand his thoughts Cobalt Blue my favorite___ How I enjoy my pink rose You know one on the trellis He did not know I was sad He never picked up on clues When he brought the blue rose home Clueless or did he plan this Plan to feed the depression So that I would get in deep Deeper into the despair Despair that leads to my death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/21/2010 8:41:00 PM
deep despair is never really meant to happen. it happens this way through an unfixed problem, that is supposed to be mended...very sad. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2010 3:53:00 PM
sad one mom...take care
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2010 3:15:00 AM
wonderful way of telling about the miseries behind a blue rose
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2010 12:07:00 AM
wow, you took it to the dark side, sara! And I thought the blue rose was so wonderful. I wish they really existed becuase I love things that are different like that. Good luck in this contest. Luv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2010 7:55:00 PM
Awesome write Sara.. good luck in Mac's contest..this one is original and unique.. a winner I predict ... with luv.. Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2010 5:09:00 PM
can we talk?
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2010 5:06:00 PM
A unique thoughts on blue rose with a unique title. Good luck if for contest
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2010 4:56:00 PM
Sad one Sarah, you should just drill deeper in the hints till he gets you that pink rose, very interesting write, enjoyed...P.D.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs