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Mundane Matters of Mortals

Alas how they suffer poverty seeds disease like a puddle breeds mosquitoes - the sickly buzz is everywhere.. the dirge of the drudge nowadays damn near everyone in refrain rites and rituals -- enough to almost make this heartless hooded old man feel faint - ha! ..a feign of concern with my bony hand to my stony brow.. mundane mortals mundane matters on their minds - can’t afford to spend their meager dreams on expensive imagination! humdrum hands beat doldrums drum but the Shaman’s drum talks a good trance his slippery soul is virtual elsewhere while a dead march queues in sad pews requiems’ of sainted airs rise in tainted air doleful tones replace the sing-song sigh the music of the wind dies another procession progresses through realms funeral-colored when final debts comes due human hues turn black - widows lost in sable weeds amidst white lily stars - weepy stems to meet my scythe when their harvest comes a planetary pandemic life as bitter as a carafe of day-old café noir gone are monotonous morns and norms when humanity afforded sugar cubes for the dirty drink - D e a t h; the darkness of my name the biological warfare I wage my savage -yet imaginative- primitive persona.. balls of spike proteins I wield like a medieval mace the penniless pay for their rich mantra; live to die and die to undyingly l - i - v - e and ooh.. the cruel pain the plagued poor endure before they reach their precious “forevermore” church bells swing and death knells ring a steeple’s hollow heart quiet when pregnant with empty space now sings fruitful with south side sorrows English style circle bell brings muffled mourning full-circle knolls tell the story of the coffined; warm womb to cold casket the departed as distant as the last toll’s fade.. the years rung - wrung out so slowly empty-hourglass hours man-handled… a forced meditation but not a mediation on mortality a haunting for those with breath still to sob as my pale horse hauls the wagon with today’s grim crop - I dare say the business of reaping souls is booming! “Death!” oh how you shudder to utter my name once I was like the distant cousin who rarely visited today I am the in-law loathed who’s barged back in - and primped in my never-before-seen covid robes I am anything but mundane Susan Ashley March 13, 2021 *mace: a heavy medieval war club with a spiked or flanged metal head, used to crush armor

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Date: 4/8/2021 10:15:00 AM
A truly powerful evocation of these trying times.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/8/2021 10:35:00 AM
Sigh.. how sad it is, D.W., for humanity to suffer in such a way especially the world's poor who don't have many if any options. Thank you for your wonderful response and for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. Your presence on my poem's page is truly appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/17/2021 4:19:00 AM
Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 3/17/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 3/16/2021 11:46:00 PM
Dear Sudan this is a very comprehensive summary! should have been POTD! excellent information!
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Date: 3/17/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Krish, it is a pleasure to read your precious thoughts. I truly appreciate you sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. I'm so glad you found it informative, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/16/2021 10:35:00 PM
Lovely penned piece Susan, so informative of the devastation over the past year but hopefully were turning the corner soon. Take care and be safe, blessings,Gordon
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Date: 3/17/2021 8:33:00 AM
Dear Gordon, it is a pleasure to see you! I thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts with me. I too, hope that we are turning the corner soon. I truly appreciate you sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. I haven't been around the last few months but will catch up with your lovely poetry soon. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 3/16/2021 5:16:00 PM
You are anything but mundane, this so profound in the world's war against covid, so many lost, but maybe just a glimmer of hope now, so sadly beautiful, especially 'doleful tones/replace the sing song sigh' - another masterpiece!
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Date: 3/17/2021 9:14:00 AM
Dear Michelle, my lovely friend and amazing poetess, your precious thoughts mean so much to me. Thank you for sharing in the heart and soul of this poem. I pray that the glimmer of hope grows into the reality of global healing - but I fear this virus will continue to be a real and deadly challenge for some time to come. I appreciate you and I hope all is well with you and yours. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/16/2021 8:16:00 AM
Wow...I can't believe all of this is in your head...so much experience and feelings expressed here... Death is a grim reminder that life has an end...a short time to live from the date of birth... Good to see you back...I always feel good to see you...All the best Susan.
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Date: 3/17/2021 9:01:00 AM
My dear friend, Arturo, I value your visit and insightful thoughts. Thank you for sharing in the emotions of this poem and for your warm welcome back. I appreciate your friendship and will visit your wonderful poetry very soon. Warmest wishes, mon ami.. ~Susan
Date: 3/15/2021 10:37:00 AM
I have read so many articles and poems about Death and the Pandemic, Susan, but none of them expressed it as beautifully as you have done here! You make use of poetic devices with such apparent ease, but I know how hard you work on each poem of yours, the end result is proof of that (you have certainly been learning the tricks of the trade :) ) Hope you are keeping well, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/17/2021 8:55:00 AM
Dear Paul, if I handle poetic devices with ease it is because of reading and learning from poetry masters like you. That you gently reinforce what I do (even when I don't realize it..) has gone such a long way in giving my pen the artistic wings to fly into ever expanding skies. Thank you for your valued friendship and for sharing in the heart of this poem with me. All is well here and I hope the same for you and yours. Warmest wishes and hugs, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Date: 3/14/2021 11:55:00 AM
You my dear friend have gifted us yet another fine creation. I agree with John- I vote this as a superbly crafted POTD! One that also celebrates a truly great poetess has returned unto the fold. A blessing for we poets and this fine site. A fav- definitely a jewel too. God bless..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/17/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Robert, for your unwavering support of my efforts. Your wonderful encouragement gives me courage to grow in my poetic endeavors. I appreciate your warm welcome back, my friend, and the high honor of your fav. Warmest wishes, dear poet.. ~Susan
Date: 3/14/2021 11:42:00 AM
So glad to see this wonderfully poignant write like only you can do Susan! I loved every word turn of phrase, personification is a marvel! So glad you're back and with a bang I must say, I vote this to be POTD, it must be read!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/17/2021 8:39:00 AM
Dear John, I can always count on you to appreciate my artistic efforts. Thank you for your precious thoughts and for the positive reinforcement in my use of poetic devices. That you acknowledge this means so much to me - as I am ever the student of the art. I appreciate your warm welcome back and your sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 8:27:00 PM
I see your compassionate heart in this write dear Susan..So sad a reality! So take me to another level of understanding this mundane times..Covid had made all things to a state where we could say, “ this world will never be the same again”...I’m gonna fave this. Happy to see you back again after a long pause.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/16/2021 7:37:00 PM
Dear JCB, thank you for sharing your treasured thoughts with me. Sadly, you are right, this world will never be the same again after the devastation of covid. We all have to adapt to a new way in a new world. I appreciate your warm welcome back and I am grateful for the high honor of your fave. I will catch up with your stunning poetry soon, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 5:09:00 PM
Powerful, sadly though, in creating vaccinations to stop COVID, they are actually creating new strains of it. A hazard of creating vaccines. Well penned.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/16/2021 7:28:00 PM
Thank you, M. L., for sharing your thoughts with me and for spending some time with the emotions of this poem. Your visit is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 1:56:00 PM
you have poured your heart out Susan and gave voice to the voiceless...yet with all the death that has come there are still those who deny covid's power...some even suggesting the flu or common cold is more dangerous...it is this form of denial to reality I find dangerous...stay safe dear poet,dear friend
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/16/2021 7:20:00 PM
Dear Poet, Dear Friend, I value your thoughts and thank you for sharing in the emotions of this poem - there is no denying covid's transformative powers from the tearing of the fabric of society to the long term effects of the illness and the tragic loss of life. I agree with you, Frederic, that the denial of reality is a very clear and present danger. Stay safe as well and warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 1:49:00 PM
Wow, Susan! The profound depth.. and "a haunting for those with breath still to sob". Oh my...an amazing write.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/14/2021 6:14:00 PM
Dear Carol, thank you for your precious thoughts and for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. I relish your kind visit and your lovely friendship. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 11:37:00 AM
Lovely to see you back posting Susan, a very deep and thought provoking verse. Re, your footnotes, unless the wealthy nations help the poorer nations with vaccines then covid 19 will mutate into stronger variants and be around for a long time to come. Scientists discovered remnants of the Spanish flu in some viruses proof that they lie dormant and don't die. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/14/2021 6:07:00 PM
Dear Tom, it's lovely to hear from you. Thank you for your pleasant visit and kind words. I agree the wealthy nations must help the poorer nations or we will never stop this virus's percolation around the globe. Indeed, remnants of dormant viruses is a scary thing we will have to deal with. Scientists have discovered ancient viruses lock in permafrost and wonder what they will do when released from the thawing ice.. like we don't have enough to worry about! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 10:33:00 AM
WoW! Susan, You have penned such a powerful piece in your unmistakable poetic style . I agree with your thoughts. Although COVID doesn't discriminate, the poor communities have been hit hard by this dreadful disease. I applaud you for writing such a write. Excellent job. PS, welcome back; I missed you, my friend:-) Alexis
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/14/2021 9:48:00 AM
My dear friend, Alexis, thank you for your warm welcome back and for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. I relish your thoughts. The beauty of your empathy is truly appreciated, sweet lady. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 10:17:00 AM
Wow, Susan, your poem is so rich--full of thoughts and ideas, and certainly you are NOT mundane! Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us. Sam said it so eloquently below!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/14/2021 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, L MILTON, for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. Your beautiful comments are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 9:59:00 AM
Dear friend, I swim in the depth of your words and wisdom! It flows over me in waves of wonder - so skillful a creator of masterful images and phrases - "can't afford to spend their meager dreams on expensive imagination!" A masterpiece from the poetess master's hand! You are truly imagination personified!
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Date: 3/14/2021 9:06:00 AM
Dearest Sam, I am so fortunate to receive your generous and uplifting comments. You are always so very kind in your assessments of my work and I am humbled and honored by your wonderful review. Thank you, my lovely rhyme-time friend and grand poetess. Your beautiful pen knows no bounds in imagination's realms. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

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