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Mum Is God

God Is Mum; Mum is Beloved. Grand ways in, Has she hidden Sorrow and tears. We are ever safe ... Yet rightly guiding, Always shielding; "Mum" plays often, Roles of saint With long life Blessed are We, kids, God 24/07/16 Contest: Backwards Poem- Laura Loo Placed 3 48 syllables - 1223344554433221

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Lu Loo

Date: 8/16/2016 11:36:00 AM

Sunita, very cute...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/16/2016 11:43:00 AM

Thanks Laura for appreciating. it was a pleasure struggling with this form of yours!:D and wonderful reading all the poem on the win list. Love Sunita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/24/2016 11:57:00 PM

It works well forwards and backwards.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/25/2016 9:01:00 AM

I'm glad you like it and see the flow. Thanks Sunita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2016 12:59:00 PM

you are brilliant to think of this. Maybe I should write of DOGS!! (reversing that word and making it plural) Gotta think of SOMETHING.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/24/2016 10:28:00 PM

That's a great idea...I'm sure you will come up with s'thg fantastic. GL and thanks for the comment, Love Sunita