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In the womb my golden days, warm with twin and thump of mother’s heart, give a kick Now and then, good for friends and family ahh! not hungry ever: want for nothing Here with twin: we have a little dance amniotic, you might say, and often acrobatic, give us a twirl and I’ll Be your partner in our chromosomal twisting, umbilical, fluid-trance; Ahh! so many words, images, thoughts, but No language yet, to put a name to our uterine caper; so I think in images: ha ha!...clever or what? But he, the Other one, in our mischief made, just floats around; yes floats! I kid you not: (how long can this last?)

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Date: 4/18/2015 3:22:00 PM
Peter, Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/9/2015 7:56:00 AM
Wow, this one is really different. A very interesting read.
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Date: 3/28/2015 8:16:00 AM
You have a whimsical poem well written that flirts with the mystical trappings of conception and birth. Emile. #7
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 3/28/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Emile!

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