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fifty years this house stood against the tide of generations leaving in its wake lizards and roaches still weaker we wield hammers and peer at each other through glass windows the masks went on hauling the debris of years to the curb we came here to rebuild we said, as the stove hung its head and the fridge slipped quietly out the door teal paint chips snowed in the kitchen but couldn't touch us in three hours the sun lit up soft brown bones we drove home as if home was external, separate from our work and we were so blissfully intact the walls had to come down first, he told us

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Date: 10/18/2012 9:03:00 PM
julia, here I am with a be-lated :-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " April, 2011 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:47:00 PM
JULIA, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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Date: 7/31/2012 2:26:00 PM
A matter-of-fact charm in the ruin. Like it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 10/27/2011 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations Julia, I love this poem. So much depth and inspiration flows through your verses and the message leaves one wondering...love it! A well deserved win! Thank you for sharing and May God Bless!
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Date: 10/9/2011 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful atmosphere arises from this poem, although I do not understand each and every sentence
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:17:00 AM
Oh wow, this is incredible, a poem of depth and meaning. Love it. Crafted beautifully:))
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Date: 9/10/2011 9:31:00 PM
Anazing poem, Julia..Congratulations on a fine win! Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/23/2011 8:01:00 PM
Congrats Julia on your wonderful win in PS contest with this glorious write luv..
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Date: 8/23/2011 4:11:00 PM
Congrats Julia on your poems placement in the contest. Vince
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations April, 2011 6th Place Contest Winner! Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in PoetrySoup's International Poetry Contest Julia. I am very happy for you. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations Julia on your win in the International Contest.Wonderful Poem.
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:37:00 PM
So happy to see your name in the sixth place in this international contest. Co0ngratulations, Julia
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poem, Julia. Enjoy your winnings. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations Julia on your fabulous Soup win with this wonderful write. Enjoy your honor, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Julia. Congratulations on your great win in the Soup Admin's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2011 8:13:00 AM
This is very intense, Julia. Many congrats on your amazing win in poetry soup international contest. *Cheers*
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:28:00 PM
Vivid images with powerful meaning. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN in the Poetry Soup competion, Julia. Elaine
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Julia. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2008 11:57:00 PM
Nice poem Julia I read When Wendy grew up and I enjoyed it also. Welcome to poetry soup where you are amongst great company. I welcome you to read my work...Raul
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Date: 12/28/2008 6:42:00 PM
Very deep poem - I wish to welcome you to the Soup - God Bless, MJ
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