Mt Fuji

Mt. Fuji’s crest jeweled by white cloudy frills; lava boils beneath Haiku syllable count 5/7/5

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Nash Maramba

Date: 2/2/2023 5:51:00 PM

Loved your piece, thanks

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/24/2023 12:18:00 PM

thanks Nash.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/28/2014 11:13:00 PM

Excellent use of this form! Peace & Blesings Matthew Anish

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/1/2014 9:29:00 AM

Well done - enjoyed your version - great imagery!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/1/2014 9:41:00 AM

Thanx Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2014 11:43:00 PM

oh my goodness. to the side of this page is an ad to take Mt. Fuji tours. hahaha

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/1/2014 9:46:00 AM

Andrea, It indeed is a wonderful experience to see Mt. Fuji from close and climb on it. Climb on it is a bit of adventure. Been there for a number of times and have scores of lovely snaps too. There is a legend there that says that if you go to Mt. Fuji once, it calls you to visit again. Also, Japanese revere the mountain and call it with respect as 'Fuji san'. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2014 11:42:00 PM

A wonder this MT. must be!!!