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Mrs Pickel - Mrs Plum

Mrs. Pickel – Mrs. Plum Bright sunbeams remember puddles On the path Where bumblebees and ladybugs Floated with lazy summer breezes, In a cleft between steep hills of beacons Looking west, Across the tidal strands Of Gooey ducks and butter clams Hidden deep within the sand - Clumps of purple mussels Grabbing onto rough mica rocks - Drained and then refilled each day As moon and tides Played hide and seek – keep away - Following in the footsteps Of laughing school girl giggles, Sisters dressed in ruffles Like dainty Queen Anne’s lace Holding hands to pirouette into the future’s plans When left hands wore new golden bands, Commitment’s covenants, Leaving behind Girlhood’s carefree days, In schoolyard secrets shared, Still talking every morning Across the waters of winter daphne’s growth And fluttering iris bathing in the rain, For new names upon an aging parchment Written in hopes and dreams of maidenhood - Dates that danced upon the calendar’s face – Gone the maiden title “Miss,” Replaced by Mrs. Minnie Pickel and one Mrs. Lena Plum. True story! My grandmother – Minnie Weber Pickel – pronounced “pickle” My great aunt, her sister, Lena Weber Plum

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Date: 3/11/2020 12:08:00 AM
Your Pickeled Plum is another winner, Sam - Congrats! ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/11/2020 12:17:00 AM
Thanks so much John. Love sharing this story and so fun to see other people enjoy their story. Congratulations much appreciated, my friend!
Date: 2/25/2020 4:34:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this story, expressed poetically. God bless you.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/27/2020 5:37:00 PM
Thank you Beata. Our family had such fun telling about Mrs. Pickel and Mrs. Plum to many stunned, incredulous, expressions. Thank you for your congratulations!
Date: 2/23/2020 9:43:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/27/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Life wasn't always easy for them but their names, and these two women, brought us, and so many people, such joy. Thank you for your congratulations!
Date: 2/22/2020 4:15:00 PM
Sam, back to say congrats on your dill victory in the Pickel (sic) contest! ~ John
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Date: 2/22/2020 3:43:00 PM
Wonderful poem I enjoyed reading , Sam, congratulations on your way
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/23/2020 1:53:00 AM
Hi Eve, thank you for visiting. So glad you enjoyed this piece. Always wonderful to hear from you!
Date: 2/22/2020 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your silver win! Nice to know the history! Great poetic tale!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/22/2020 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Krish! I think, with no perspective at all, it is a fun tale - a tale of life!
Date: 2/22/2020 12:27:00 PM
Sam, I agree with Nina! This was a fun one to read! What a cool story and sweet too! Congratulations on Silver!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/22/2020 12:57:00 PM
Hi Kim, Thank you for your message and congratulations! I have to agree with you - it is kind of a cool story. So glad you had fun sharing in the story.
Date: 2/22/2020 11:51:00 AM
Sam, congratulations on your placement. Thank you for sharing such a fun poem to read. ~ Sonia
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/22/2020 11:55:00 AM
Hi Sonia! Thank you for visiting and for your congratulations. This contest gave me the opportunity to remember these two very special women and the irony of their married names! So glad you enjoyed their story.
Date: 2/22/2020 11:29:00 AM
Sam, congrats for your win for this very delightful and witty write! Many thanks for your kind comment re my entry and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/22/2020 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Bob! I love traveling with the poets here on PS! Have learned so much from all of you. Loved your entry. All the best to you!
Date: 2/21/2020 8:21:00 PM
Sam, I was flat out charmed by this tale of two sisters growing up and marrying into such fun names! Great write ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/21/2020 9:48:00 PM
Thank you so much John. I had such fun writing this tribute, remembering the stories of their childhood and the wonderful ironic twist of their married names. It is such a fun story. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Date: 2/20/2020 3:40:00 PM
Like Jan, I loved the imagery. I also thoroughly enjoyed the energy that never wavered in this colorful, imaginary write - it delighted me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/20/2020 3:51:00 PM
Hi CayCay, Thank you for visiting to met Mrs. Pickel and Mrs. Plum. And, thank you for your encouraging message! So glad their story made you smile! Hugs to you!
Date: 2/20/2020 2:56:00 PM
your imagery is awesome and what an amazing story Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/20/2020 4:33:00 PM
Jan, Thank you so much! It was an honor to honor my grandmother and great aunt in this story. I can still see these places and picture them in the scenery! They were amazing women!

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