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Mr Lynch

The house was mostly dark, save a dim light on the porch. I moved up the crumbling walk and stopped before a paint peeled door. Grasping the iron knocker, I tapped three times, hearing the sound echo in the bowels of the house. “Who is it” a faint voice said. “Go away”. “Trick or Treat” I cheerfully called. After a moment or two, the door slowly swung open. Standing there was an old man, bent at the hip, holding a cane with a serpent head studded with ruby eyes. He was dressed in a rumpled black suit of some vintage. His hair was white and stringy, in much need of being cut. On his neck he had a red mark as if his collar were too tight. “What do you want” he growled. “I’m here collecting candy” I said, holding up my bag for him to see. “It’s Halloween”. He mumbled something, then said “step in, I’ll see what I can find, and turning, shuffled off into another room. I looked around. Everything was covered with dust. The clock in the hall uttered not a sound. If it weren’t for the old man, it would look like no one lived here at all. Soon he returned, bearing a candy bar of questionable vintage. Dropping it in my bag he said “now leave” and pointed with his cane towards the door. “I haven’t seen you around here before” I ventured. “I sleep a lot” he said. “Now go, leave me alone” The next day, while I was sorting through my confection treats, my dad picked up the candy bar with the faded wrapper and said “where did you get this” “I haven’t seen one of these in years”. “I got it at that big old house just down the street” I said. My dad said “son, you must be mistaken. No one lives in that old house. It’s been vacant since old Mr. Lynch hung himself there right before Halloween, about twenty years ago. Written for "A Creepy, Scary, Haunted House Poem Please' contest Bob Quigley Sept 19, 2011

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Date: 9/25/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart Constance's "A Creepy, Scary, Haunted House" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, Bob
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 10:16:00 AM
Much appreciated Dr Ram
Date: 9/23/2011 12:33:00 AM
what a character..oooh! grilling and really toasting, a topper!.. APPLUASE to you for superb win, bob!...huggs
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 1:00:00 AM
Many thanks for stopping by. Appreciate your comments nette
Date: 9/23/2011 12:16:00 AM
Congrats Bob on first place win with this haunting poetry luv...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 12:29:00 AM
And to you as well Linda-Marie
Date: 9/23/2011 12:10:00 AM
Ooooh real chilly one Bob. Many congrats for this win.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 12:30:00 AM
Thank you Tahera
Date: 9/22/2011 11:17:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Bob. Nice short short! Cyndi
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 12:30:00 AM
Appreciate the kudos Cyndi
Date: 9/22/2011 9:37:00 PM
Ooh you were brave to go there. Very scary. Congratulations on your win. Lvoe, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 12:31:00 AM
I but if I were. Thanks Joyce
Date: 9/22/2011 9:13:00 PM
Awesome ending - very twilight zoneish. enjoyed your story. congratulations on your creepy win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 12:33:00 AM
I'll have Mr Lynch come hold your hand. Thanks Debbie
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 12:32:00 AM
Doo Doo Doo Doo. Thanks Susan
Date: 9/22/2011 8:27:00 PM
ohh wow..it sounds so real!! congrad's now I'll have nightmares! light & love
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Date: 9/22/2011 7:40:00 PM
Dear Bob, Fact or fiction??? Pray telll! ......Congrats on this first place spot in such a competitive contest. I don't know what it is about this time of year. It seems to bring the KID out in all of us!! Especially YOU! lol. Again, congrats. Gwendolen
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/23/2011 12:34:00 AM
We're all just kids really. Nothing wrong with that. Thanks Gwendolen
Date: 9/19/2011 5:43:00 PM
good luck in the contest p.d.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/20/2011 12:25:00 AM
Much appreciated
Date: 9/19/2011 2:06:00 PM
Great spooky atmospheric poem. Guess Mr Lynch 'hung' around long after.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/19/2011 3:05:00 PM
Yes, by the "stretch" of my imagination. Thanks for stopping by John
Date: 9/19/2011 1:47:00 PM
Scary Halloween candy bar..Enjoyed reading your captiviting story..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Sara
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/19/2011 3:05:00 PM
Thanks much Sara.

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