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Mr Lie

You said you loved me So why do I feel hated You said you cared for me So why do I feel abused You said you'd never leave me So why am I alone You said you understand me So why aren't I understood You said I can do anything So why has everything failed You said you would never let me go So why am I falling You said to never give up But I'm long past that The last thing you ever said was I love you and I won't stop till I die I thought you said you loved me That's what I get for trusting Mr. Lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/28/2016 4:17:00 AM
Happens to the best of good write. Skat
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Date: 5/23/2016 5:23:00 AM
Nice poem. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/28/2016 11:03:00 AM
Autumn, your verse sounds sooo familiar to me...Unfortunately I totally relate:( Awesome job of heartfelt expression!!When it's right you'll know. Experience gives us the wisdom to see deceit...best of love, peace...jill :)
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Date: 4/28/2016 9:47:00 AM
He is in the the dog house, feel the emotions good write stephen
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