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Mr Electric Blue Spider

Who is he? They were asking in Montana, Bandicoot. It was Mr. Electric Blue spider, and he was a beaut. He kept creeping along, pretending he did not understand. Besides, he was on his way to hear a Mariachi Band. Seriously, do you know him? My neighbor asked me. I thought she was too curious, we call her Widow Zee. He’s an out-of-towner, a stranger, I said in my best voice. I hear that he is a widow man, his deceased wife was Joyce.

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Date: 12/2/2022 7:43:00 PM
Caren, I'm always delighted by the way you come up with names to rhyme. It's rather unique to you. Can you rhyme Hankins with anything? I know you could put Milton up at the Hilton, but Hankins???
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/3/2022 6:53:00 PM
Shankins, spankins, quankins, lankins, dankins, mankins, jankins, crankins, dwankins, slankins, smankins, clankins, wankins, zankins, vankins, other than this - no.

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