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Mr Brown

Mr Brown's big old shoes Always spread on his blue car Car as old as moonlight Laughter it gives to look at Mr Brown wouldn't care... It is an old gift He would tell me and Mata 'My dead wife gave me'... 'I will wear till death' And then he would give us a Rose We would smile real wide And giggle hard, then run home But drop by his wife's old grave Just to drop her the sweet rose

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Date: 12/31/2017 5:02:00 AM
A lovely write, dear sister.
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Date: 1/14/2017 7:21:00 AM
I love your sweet, pleasant humour, Abosede! Such a lovely ending, too! Regards // paul
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 2/11/2017 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Paul.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 2/11/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 12/12/2016 12:24:00 AM
Full of fun. Loved it.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/16/2016 10:04:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks Afzal.
Date: 12/11/2016 8:07:00 PM
this is really sweet!!
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/16/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 12/11/2016 5:55:00 PM
Lovely! Funny a poem. Well written, Abosede
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/16/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks for reading Adeniji...
Date: 12/11/2016 5:52:00 PM
Awe, I agree with Eve, humor but so sweet. I love it!
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/15/2016 6:28:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 12/11/2016 5:37:00 PM
This is so heartwarming and endearing poem, Abosede... I love the humor but I love the sentiment. Hugs Eve
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/15/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Eve...
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/15/2016 6:27:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Eve...

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