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Moving With Spontaneity

early nightfall fondling skin on glowing shafts from a world so blind my body enters cramps of memory ...dodoitsu...
~ As early nightfall tousles my hair prism light, the alchemy of a ceremonial parade begins in this panel of a forest like a mystic scene ~ fondling my skin…jutting from nowhere, a relay of tigers and flamingos swivel on glowing shafts in the pale dark ... I freeze. Some quick time frames away, the jungle rises with raw stirrings of wildlife; an explosion ~ from a world curving a zebra's flowing movement of unrehearsed art, of twilight spontaneity ~ oh so blind to human, mental gazes; they slide away from such calculated moments as .~ my body enters their changing symmetry collapsing in mindless trance that nothing from my eyes is ever hidden, not even the low gushing in my breath… I shut my lids to memorize the anatomy of their kind faces, those rising limbs simply estranged from rehearsed gaiety. And I seize their impressions defying the seeming ~ cramps of man’s robotic strides; yet, i cannot hold them inside this head’s waves ~ of memory , consumed with the grace displayed by creatures’ unbridled rites to its gods… I become the humble slave of divine beasts. © `~ ~ ~ ~`` *from my journal about a night safari in Singapore for Debbie Guzzi's Etcetera by nette onclaud

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Date: 3/21/2012 2:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/19/2012 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Et cetera" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:48:00 PM
I love your painterly spiritual touch! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:49:00 PM
NETTE, nice verse for Debbie's, contest.. Congratulations~always*PD
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Date: 3/18/2012 7:58:00 AM
So beautiful Nette. Many congrats dear friend for this win. Thanks for my placement in your contest. After a long time I felt like writing poetry again.
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:36:00 AM
differently potrayed and intresting as usual.congrats on the placement Nette..........~sashi
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Date: 3/17/2012 8:03:00 PM
This is great Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/17/2012 6:14:00 PM
Wonderful piece of poetry.I love your presentation,Nette.Oh!,this is scientific and informative....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...Kudos to you,Friend...
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:04:00 PM
Nette, hurry and do that one you said would be too short. I bet it will be great. Mine is too long. Someone even implied to me that it was too long. I am finally going to get off here. Maybe I can get the start of a suntan today!!!
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:30:00 AM
Done that in Singapore, nette, could feel your emotions in every word, awesome. harry
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Date: 3/8/2012 11:39:00 PM
wow, that was just a journal entry??? You must be writing gorgeous imagery everywhere, Nette!!!
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Date: 3/8/2012 9:29:00 PM
I am sending you a soupmail.
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Date: 3/8/2012 9:23:00 PM
This is mysteriously beautiful Nette.Sometimes you seems to be from another planet.This one goes to my Favs!
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:43:00 PM
animals, they know the way to go. have you ever seen a gay lion? of course not and the day you do be sure to let us know.
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:03:00 PM
mysterious and intriguing and so beautiful Nette luv.. u always amaze me with creative power luv.. thanjxx so much for my win.. this was a delightful escapade for a contest luv.. oh..
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Date: 3/8/2012 3:55:00 PM
Reads like an exciting time in your life..Glad that you journaled so that we could read..Very expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..The Kimo that you read is not my entry into the contest..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2012 3:41:00 PM
Enjoy your night safari nette, and flamingos swivel.... -oxox love Anne-Lise
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