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Moving On

Moving On we are human tuning forks vibrating to our own frequencies searching for the rhythm and the pulse of the universe the peace of mind we're looking to find the occasional perfect moment to prove we're not blind so I accept my flaws and their probable cause because in the last place to dream there can be no laws

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Date: 9/13/2014 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations Kevin. Comparing us with a tuning fork is brilliant.
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Date: 9/13/2014 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Kevin. It takes us a long time to accept our flaws...a long time, sometimes, just to identify them. Enjoyed reading this piece.
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Date: 9/13/2014 8:31:00 AM
Interesting how laws are viewed as restrictions. However when we embrace the laws of the universe they provide us with true freedom. It is when we fight them that we cause ourselves and others pain. A bird is not fighting gravity, it uses the laws of gravity to soar to great heights. I like that your piece has caused me to ponder. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:47:00 AM
Hi Kevin, congratulations on your fine win! Excellent write! Pandita
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