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Moving On

SEEING BEAUTY IN IMPERFECTION Christina Oswald December 06, 2013 Imperfect hollow inside no turning back Closed door open no more A chapter to a book hopefully forgotten Pages yellow, tattered, and broken An innocence and heart stolen Time lost not to be regained Moving on, step by step No time or room for regret Stronger upon each step Moving on is easy, but the reasons hard to forget

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/19/2013 12:00:00 AM

Congrats Christine on making it into the winners circle..'

Skat A

Date: 12/17/2013 10:43:00 PM

Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Christian,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2013 9:53:00 PM

a lovely win Christian,....xox...PD

Donna Jones

Date: 12/17/2013 6:47:00 PM

Moving on...no time for regret....awesome poem...Congratulations on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2013 10:40:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the: "SEEING BEAUTY..." contest, Christina. - A pleasure to read your poem again and a pleasure to take part. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2013 8:34:00 AM

A joy to read your poem on seeing the beauty in imperfection and congratulations on the win, Christina

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2013 4:13:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Christina ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2013 2:24:00 PM

Hi, Christina. a very deep poem...emotions strongly felt. Welcome to poetry soup.luv..Linda