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Moving On

i won't deny the obvious that you're always in my mind if in case you didn't notice, then you're definitely blind. my everything-actions and words are very well-defined all's nothing to you, so the past and my love, i will bind. there's nothing left for us to do, when all is said and done nowhere we can go back to, when the feeling's really gone I gave you all my love, with all my heart, until there was none Pain changes people- i guess that is known by everyone The pain is too much; you left me with no other choice Though I tried so hard to reach out, you never heard my voice I was shouting, screaming, and crying, you ignored the noise I thought you’re different, then, you’re just like the other boys How I envy you, living life like you’re never alone You smile and laugh, like you never needed to atone But then, you’re missing out, you are running as you move on I want to stop you, but it’s you, there’s nothing to beckon When you love someone, you’ll never learn to fall out of love You’ll never get tired of it, just like our God up above It feels so great, as if you are flying free like a dove Yes, that’s how it really feels… that little thing we call LOVE. I feel blessed to have fallen in love with a guy like you I didn't just fall, I also grow, that, I really do.. my love for you remains, but hope? i am letting it go, You’ll always be in my heart, ‘til the day I say “I do”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/5/2013 11:18:00 AM
A lot to think about here.
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Date: 2/26/2013 5:46:00 PM
Nice monorhyme. The emotion really show through.
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Xao Tian
Date: 2/27/2013 7:52:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 2/26/2013 6:25:00 AM
love most hard thing to figure out, great write
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Xao Tian
Date: 2/26/2013 5:42:00 PM
thank you!
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Date: 2/26/2013 5:37:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 2/26/2013 1:48:00 AM
Jona a heartfelt write...David
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Xao Tian
Date: 2/26/2013 5:15:00 PM
thank you!

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