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Moving Ahead

potholed , boulder strewn winding path up steep inclines unwavering goal water cascades down wearing , skirting , bounding rocks I will make my way ~07 Jul 2016~

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Al Juman

Date: 7/11/2016 3:32:00 AM

nice courage my friend

Karam Misra
Date: 7/11/2016 3:36:00 AM

Thank you, Juman. ~karam~

Frederick Espiritu

Date: 7/8/2016 6:36:00 AM

facing any hindrance to have a goal... nice senryu...

Karam Misra
Date: 7/8/2016 6:39:00 AM

Thank you for the visit, Frederick, and for the compliment. ~karam~

David Smith

Date: 7/8/2016 6:20:00 AM

Yes. Life is an obstacle course. I think you have the resources to tackle it. Your mountains are bigger than ours. Your description of water meeting rock is beautiful. Do keep writing. David from NZ

Karam Misra
Date: 7/8/2016 6:29:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and your encouragement, David. ~karam~

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/7/2016 9:01:00 AM

Sounds like an adventure full of obstacles, keep going the right direction : )

Karam Misra
Date: 7/7/2016 9:07:00 AM

Keep on moving, yeah! That's right, Casarah. Thanks for dropping by. ~karam~