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MOVE On, because I am better than he. On, because it couldn't have been real. On, because I accepted less than I deserve. On, because I ignored the clues. On, because he was blind to, my worth, my ability to love deeply, my sweetness. On, because it's over. It's over, it's over. I'll take a deep breath of acceptance, and move on.

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Date: 4/15/2024 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, For context, I wrote this for my niece going through a breakup.
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Date: 4/15/2024 2:38:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/15/2021 11:17:00 AM
Hello George Calabresse, so niec to meet you. Yes you are right Move on because you are better than he or she. Good advice, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup.Enjoy your day my friend.
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