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Mourning Commute

Mourning Commute would be phoenixes masquerade in Gotham snowbirds alighting outrunning the cock's crow leaving their respective nests cold huddled in subterranean tunnels awaiting the next iron worm three piece sardines breaststroking up steam in relentless pursuit of false promises

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2016 4:48:00 PM

yes, sounds so much better to me..love it. LINDA

Karega Ani
Date: 7/23/2016 5:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda. I am honored.

Skat A

Date: 7/21/2016 1:18:00 PM

Karega, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Karega Ani
Date: 7/21/2016 1:45:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT. I have traditionally been rather hermetic when it comes to my page poetry, so this is, in a manner of speaking, a new experience for me. Thank you so much for the warm welcome!