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Mountian

One Word Builds on another and still yet others till a mountain of words form a reality and a state of mentality. Paragraphs of pointed potentials Climbing the slope of fundamentals. The top only lets you see where you are. Maybe where you came from and where your going. but who knows of the foot or still deeper the mountains soul. Digging under the surface, studying the foundation Looking at each word within its context. A dark and sometimes cold task. Feeling the texture between the words and lines. We understand the root shows why

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Date: 12/29/2014 10:24:00 AM
James, how lovely! The words themselves, then the crafting it took to achieve that shape! Very clever and a wonderful read. Thank you! -Lesley(Putti)
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Date: 12/23/2014 4:13:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup, James !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2014 3:08:00 PM
Hi James, WOW, this is deep, and creative. Maybe a free verse, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and you're poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: you're new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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