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May 6, 2024
PLaced 1st: This or That, Vol 25 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh


 

A dispenser of dishonest vice, a peddler of blatant lies, In his unscrupulous realms, nobility of truth sadly dies, Where righteous vibes of morality and decency agonize; Where benevolence cries, pensive in verity’s demise. Masked in aura of dubious eyes, spurious is his smile, Hiding deceptions of his charismatic, charlatan style; Counterfeit is the profile sporting thrill of knavish devise, Proffering affectionate gile, spinning webs of disguise. Empowering hypnotism of an alluring, charming face, Weaving traps of fanciful tales his adventures chase, Mesmerizing them; seeking the disheartened as prey, Bestowing faux lexicons of praise, that brazenly betray. Broken pledges and vows, now bawl from his burial site, Deep within remorseful soul, churning anguished fright, Awakening graveyard of victims in nightmarish night, Burning effigies of dreams destroyed, feelings contrite. Be on guard for imposters vying lure of sensual glance, Beware of tenders, beckoning love, enticing romance, Beware of mountebank, a swindler~ thievery is his art; Dedicated lifelong, to mission of stealing innocent heart.

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Date: 5/18/2024 8:39:00 AM
Vijay a firm fav for me and huge congratulations on your 1st win in this contest. The world has become a hiding place for the decay that finds some comfortable filthy place for their sort, they think we can't see through their untrue facade, fortunately some of us some still can, to these tricksters bad fortune. Hope you are doing well me friend, a true masterpiece. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/16/2024 2:22:00 PM
Excellent writing, Vijay. I love it and it's a fave for me. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 5/10/2024 3:52:00 PM
A great poem Vijay! Unfortunately, these words can apply to so many in our world! Debx
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Date: 5/10/2024 3:26:00 PM
Even being warned, one can still be fooled. I appreciate this poem to the top of my brain. The story, with poignant adjectives, brings this phantom to life. An excellent read.
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Date: 5/9/2024 4:49:00 PM
Vijay, your marvelous poem imparts needed wisdom to the unwary. As usual, I delighted in your beautiful imagery. Blessings.
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Date: 5/9/2024 8:52:00 AM
Hello Vijay, you inked a powerful poem! The imagery is striking & the condemnation strong. You capture the devastation of a deceiver perfectly. Wow! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/7/2024 7:56:00 PM
' Be on guard for imposters. ' You're absolutely right, Vijay. Many are out there in the world. Your thoughts hold meaning and depth. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/7/2024 9:49:00 AM
"Counterfeit is the profile sporting thrill of knavish devise, Proffering affectionate gile, spinning webs of disguise." Perfect. "Bestowing faux lexicons of praise, that brazenly betray." Ego can be a dreadful downfall. "Be on guard for imposters vying lure of sensual glance, Beware of tenders, beckoning love, enticing romance, Beware of mountebank, a swindler~ thievery is his art; Dedicated lifelong, to mission of stealing innocent heart." Wow! A knockout. Excellent poetry!
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Date: 5/7/2024 5:16:00 AM
"A dispenser of dishonesty and a peddler of lies", Well written Vijay
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Date: 5/7/2024 2:23:00 AM
So many imposters disguised in charming facade. Sadly the reality. This poem highlights that and reminds us to see beyond what they show, and believe, actions and not tales woven to lure innocent souls! Your rhymes here flowing in such eloquence really stood out for me! You are so good at them and youv touched such a deep subject in the most poetic rhythm that gets readers to think and ponder while also admiring your poetic prowess! Excellent write dear vijay! Definitely a top win too! FAVE! BOL
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Date: 5/6/2024 10:59:00 PM
I really loved this poem, even I think I know who is about, it can sure apply to a few leaders these days, xoxo peace and love
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Date: 5/6/2024 7:13:00 PM
Very striking picture of the dark mazes within the charlatan's scheming soul, I really enjoyed your final stanza, beware indeed!
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Date: 5/6/2024 4:32:00 PM
your poem is brilliant, a masterpiece of words!! I am amazed, no astounded, by your creativity!! The vocabulary and diction were excellent as was the fluidity of your lines. With your examples you showed a deep understanding of the word "Mountebank." Excellent. Applause! Accolades.
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Date: 5/6/2024 12:59:00 PM
Dear Vijay, you wrote a Spendid poem that revolved around several stories of people being defrauded of their riches and dignity by dishonesty and fraud. Your poem is incredibly well-crafted! Due to the current profitability of the deceit industry, this lesson will endure indefinitely. A repulsive person who never uses inefficient profanity, but he does so in a stylish manner. The lexicon is impressive, and the depiction is breathtaking. This one exhibits exquisite, profound lines, as though he conceals himself behind an aura of doubtful gazes and a deceptive smile.
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Date: 5/6/2024 12:41:00 PM
You write a poem about a despicable person with great flair, never stooping to irrelevant dirty words. Great diction, but also a wonder description. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/6/2024 11:57:00 AM
Vijay, there is no question we need to be aware and careful. There are so many stories of people being swindled out of their money and self-respect though fakery and deceit. Your poem is a great construction!! A lesson for all time since trickery has become a business. There's no shortage of distortion in politics as well. We need to be skeptical.
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Date: 5/6/2024 11:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "Mountebank" write. "Good Luck" What a true ending... Have a fun day/week writing away...................
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Date: 5/6/2024 9:25:00 AM
You have expounded on the theme wonderfully, Vijay, should do well:)
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Date: 5/6/2024 6:46:00 AM
Some wonderful dark and deep lines in this one like masked in aura of dubious eyes, spurious is his smile... Great take on the theme and best of luck in the contest..
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Date: 5/6/2024 6:42:00 AM
That is wrong for a person to do anything that would harm a person especially in the medical field. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 5/6/2024 5:28:00 AM
Boy, this could describe a number of TV evangelists, big business tycoons, politicians and other various and assorted roues. "Be on guard against imposters..." Good advice Veej. Hard hitting poetry. Have a great week
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