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Mountains

The base camp was my youth I stood alone, ill-equipped, looking up. The challenge before me, gullies filled with tangled unknowns and sharp lessons. My guides had abandoned me, left, tight lipped no map, no promise little hope and so I started my ascent, faltering, stumbling, tightly gripping any friendships I could find, skinning my knees on setbacks as ages passed until I found myself peering over the summit, elated. But in the distance oh God................. another mountain and at its base another me For contest 'Mountains', sponsor Julia Ward

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Date: 7/22/2016 3:20:00 PM
Congrats well written great poem xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/23/2016 12:54:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, glad you liked it. Viv x
Date: 7/21/2016 2:06:00 PM
Viv, what an achievement! After one ascent you're ready for the next! Congrats at your great achievement!
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Date: 7/19/2016 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations Viv....skat
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/19/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thanks, Skat, hope you're well, Viv x
Date: 7/18/2016 3:17:00 PM
Very deep imagery.....Congratulations on your trophy win....
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/18/2016 9:56:00 PM
Cheers, Janice, glad you like it. Viv x
Date: 7/18/2016 2:13:00 PM
I love the imageries you have left, Viv, wow... Congratulations on your win!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/18/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Eve, a bit surprised, myself. Viv x
Date: 7/18/2016 11:14:00 AM
The conquest! reminds me of my mountain climbing days...:D Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/18/2016 8:55:00 AM
Very nice! Comgrats!
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Date: 7/18/2016 8:37:00 AM
Another one and then another, yes never ending mountains for us!Congrats Viv.its a lovely poem!
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Date: 7/18/2016 8:19:00 AM
I love your poem, Viv, and it's metaphorical power. Congrats on your well-deserved Second Place in this Premiere Contest. 7 Sandra
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Date: 7/18/2016 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations Viv, well done...
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/18/2016 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Charlie, appreciate the visit. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/18/2016 4:22:00 AM
Congrat well written great poem x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/18/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, very kind. Viv x
Date: 7/18/2016 12:27:00 AM
I enjoyed the humour in this one, making the mountain to second position in my contest. Well done, Viv! Don't forget to alter "it's base" to 'its base', then it will shine even more. Julia, xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/18/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thanks, Julia, good point. Very kind. Viv x
Date: 7/13/2016 3:26:00 PM
We all climb mountains hoping it is our last. Amazing piece Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/14/2016 6:56:00 AM
I would ford every stream with you, Jean. Assuming you have a puncture repair kit. Viv x
Date: 7/13/2016 5:39:00 AM
I like the feel of this piece, well expressed!
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Date: 7/13/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, a little allegorical maybe, we all have mountains. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/12/2016 5:27:00 PM
Viv, this is WONDERFUL best of luck in the contest and I am loving it 7 ~
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/12/2016 11:31:00 PM
Thanks, BW, hope your metaphorical mountains are little ones x
Date: 7/12/2016 8:51:00 AM
and a big seven.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/12/2016 11:32:00 PM
I'll put it on my mantlepiece x
Date: 7/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
dang that first part was one WHOLE lifetime for ME, Viv. My next mountain has got to be in another realm?? This is REALLY good work, I love it.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/12/2016 11:32:00 PM
I pray that your next mountain is many, many years distant, Andrea. Viv x
Date: 7/12/2016 5:50:00 AM
..."another me..."...Lovely, and brilliantly ...
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/12/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Probir, me going all complex so early in the day. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/12/2016 5:11:00 AM
Clever Viv, well done.....Ian
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/12/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thanks, Anthony Mark. Er, does Doncaster meaning anything to you? If so, soupmail me. Hmmmm........
Date: 7/12/2016 4:48:00 AM
Brilliant take on the mountains theme Mr Viv:-) I hope this is a winner for you:-) Sure have some mountains to climb on our journey through life. hugs jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/12/2016 4:59:00 AM
Maybe we should share the same rope, Jan x

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