Mountains

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~Mountains~ (Choka) Over the mountains Sun shines in all its splendor Beautiful trees stand out tall Birds assemble there Eagles soar right to the top Wild flowers covers the ground Blue mountains stand grand Deers and bears roam all around Eyes can't get enough nice scene All trees seem to glow You can feel God's loving touch Breathe in enjoy all the view. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January.27.2016

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White Sage

Date: 1/27/2016 4:59:00 PM

beautiful images and excellent write...well penned Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2016 2:19:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,White Sage,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply I appreciate it. Most kind of you!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D