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Mountain Tracking 'Make Their Jaw Drop'

Climbing the mountain cliff, Banging crazily led to foot slip, Gone like a mad toggling mind flips what a new outlook trip!! Frozen mind stopped like a clip, Slipped only little down yepp!!! Felled to a new edge, Waited for a moment thinking out of cage Now stopped mind blood flowing like a leeward gaze. Cutting the edge of mountain with a new knife, The sharpness has its own impact on life Like a voice shrilling over high shout As if the weapon with tempered music out. The idea of falling down from a huge height O my god!!!Give me courage to fight ,like a kite like a free fall, face is turning from red green pale white Now unable to see the ground sight, I know I am doing is not right. Wake up dud wake up ohhh!!It was just a dream of night!!!!!!

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Date: 6/3/2016 11:58:00 PM
Nice twist in the end, made my jaws really drop:)
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