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Mountain Swimming Hole

Lightning through the body strikes As the chest presses the glass Of mountain water yet undisturbed By the flow of thrill-seekers filing in. "Once is not enough" Is the cry of many youth Who seem undisturbed By the heights needed for the proof That they're not afraid of nature's playground And can swim back on command. Parents wince in unison As their child safely lands.

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Date: 6/5/2016 8:14:00 PM
In a modest brevity, a great interpretation of life...enjoyed reading...
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Date: 6/5/2016 8:00:00 PM
Very powerful poem James...great
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