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Mountain Snow

Snow cap A mountain top Filled to the brim With an icy cold treat A white delight, frigid fun Excitement Russell Sivey Form Vignette

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2012 3:20:00 PM

hey cool, centered, it resembles a small capped mountain too!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/29/2012 2:35:00 PM

You just made snow so much fun.. wonderful image here my friend... Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2012 12:47:00 PM

I can see the scene..If for a contest, reads like a winner ...Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by ..I hope that you are still laughing..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/29/2012 12:26:00 PM

It sounds a bit like me, a white delight but frigid fun lol . love it Russell

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/29/2012 11:32:00 AM

nice to see yet another poetic wonder from you, russell... exciting is the word; enjoyed the visual appeal of this vignette.. am glad you are writing in this form.. magnificent scene!..:) huggs