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Mountain Return

I escape into rugged altitude, above the developed fence lines, a winding trail my compass. Sleeping on rich earth. Listening to the songs of the pines, as alpine gales carry fresh growth. Alone, with the sun on my naked shoulders, I bathe in virgin streams. I refresh my appetite with sweet berries. Native brook trout crackle over my campfire. Plans of complete withdrawal creep into my thoughts, while I sit, lost in the glow of the embers. Return to the modern life does not move me. But, I have visions of you standing in the valley, beckoning. Your curves in soft light entice. The lustrous aroma of your hair I covet. I am drawn to your flirtatious eyes. My weakness is your inviting smile. When I do break this isolation, affection will rain down on your neglected body. My hands will search out your every surface. I will hold you through the rapturous night, indulging our passionate desires. And you will know why I returned!

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Date: 5/29/2011 8:58:00 AM
Brilliant........a touch of freshness ....while reading......nice to read this........
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:28:00 PM
Oh my god. Hands down one of the best poems i have read. I am glad to know there are still a few men out there who know how to woo a lady and give her his entire being.
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:16:00 PM
Isolation once broken , it evaporates, Michael
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:16:00 PM
she will be glad you returned!! a passionate and beautifully written poem...
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:08:00 PM
brilliant ! When I do break this isolation, affection will rain down on your neglected body. My hands will search out your every surface. ............when i read those lines i feel the true essence of poetry..!!! and ur better than the best one's
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