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Mountain of Faith

Far off bathed in hazy blue light, Reaching and hugging clouds real tight. A soft and peaceful landscape scene How romantic it all would seem. Sunlight casting patches on your back, The eye follows a meandering track. Snowy dust glitter down one side, As cloud shadows drift and glide. But when I draw so very near I see the rock face, repelling sheer. Jagged teeth grinning down Ridges form an angry frown. Avalanche path an ugly scar A drunken path from afar. Fluffy clouds now roiling black The deafening sound of lightnings crack. Trees bow, groan and creak. Golden grasses, now very bleak. I feel the anguish sear my heart. Natures forces tear dreams apart. The wind howling for evermore Be careful what you pray for. As the mountain and I become as one, I despairingly cry:"Thy will be done"!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 9/28/2008 12:35:00 PM
This is very descriptive. The ending line is ironical in the scheme of the poem. I like the shift and how the piece ends. That's really unexpected and makes the piece more impacting. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/19/2008 3:49:00 PM
Love your poetry. I think I've read them all and hope you will be posting more soon. Wonderful message in this one. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 7/26/2008 2:45:00 PM
enjoyed this fine piece of poetry and thank you for reading my poems and for your kind comments
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