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Mountain- River

. .,.,……,.,,,,,, . tired mountain stands guard watching landscapes through steep days mists soften his paths crest ripples in bops river whirling late noon dance frothy scent invites charm drenches river sprinkling mountain with kisses dusk romance for two © …………. for Linda Marie’s Haiku Hodgepodge Trio written by nette onclaud

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/13/2012 4:27:00 PM

I was not here when this contest ran, belated congrats. Beautiful poem, enjoyed reading. I see why it was chosen.

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 4:28:00 AM

Nette.......Wonderful Haiku. I have been tring to master the Haiku and it's work like yours that inspires me to push myself a little harder. Wonderful job and congrats, cause you deserve it. This kind of writing is why I chose you as a fav poet. You just keep showing us (or, at least, me), how it's done. Nice job sweetheart. I am not going to say, " keep 'em coming", because I know you will and I read all your work. I may not comment on them, but I read them and like them all. Congrats....xoxo.

Samual Ronthorpe
Date: 2/5/2012 4:30:00 AM

Remember all my comments here the next time I enter one of your contests.......LMAO..... J/K.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/31/2012 4:45:00 PM

congrats on your 1st place win nette, lovely imagery as always; I love that last one, the river sprinkling the mountain with kisses, very romantic! :-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 2:00:00 PM

Nicely done, Nette. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/31/2012 8:41:00 AM

congrats on your first place win nette, beautifully done

Glenn Sentes

Date: 1/31/2012 2:55:00 AM

i'm imagining a love paradise! Here's to your countless firsts! Mabuhay ka, Binibining Nette! ;)

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 1/31/2012 1:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win in this contest Haiku hodge podge Net......spandan

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/30/2012 9:46:00 PM

Nette, so wonderful and such clear imagery, a well deserved win, congratulations, Greg

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 8:28:00 PM

Congratulation on your win for this wonderful poem,my friend. Loved it, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations, very well deserved win, Nette.

David Williams

Date: 1/30/2012 3:43:00 PM

Nette, congrats on your great win..David

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/30/2012 2:33:00 PM

You go, gurl!! Just a wonderful nature lovin' win!! Congrats, Gwendolen

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/30/2012 2:18:00 PM

An honor to share this spot with your beautiful poems! Congratulations, Nette!

Jon Arno

Date: 1/30/2012 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your nice win. Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:12:00 PM

congrats Nette luv on first place win .. magnificent entry. thankxx luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 11:26:00 PM

Nette, an amazing pack of haiku's..good luck in the contest..... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/26/2012 12:58:00 AM

beautiful images Nette, blessings and all the very best, Bren : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2012 9:21:00 AM

thankxx Mette luv for supporting my contest.. good luck.. knowing I will be astounded once again luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 7:54:00 AM

I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Nette. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/25/2012 6:10:00 AM

Romancing the hills...what a great entry! Gwendolen

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/25/2012 5:15:00 AM

this is excellent, some awesome imagery here. harry

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 1/25/2012 12:33:00 AM

Hmmmm!A wonderful haiku, I liked more your haiku than mine nice one really loved reading it.......spandan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2012 10:58:00 PM

wow, a stunning last line: sweet dusk reunion!! Love it, Nette, this is a shoe-in!!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 1/24/2012 8:38:00 PM

Oh, I so like yours more than mine! I especially enjoyed your last haiku, first line. charm drench... oh, lol, speaking of charm, please check out my blog, my reason for living. I posted a picture of my girl. I don't know how long I'll keep the blog up, as I am not comfortable putting her photo on the internet, but I so wanted to share this with my Soup pals. I know you've been curious. My angel with the dancing curls. She's tame in this one! LOL. The box is her idea. Hugs, Cyndi