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Mother's Eyes

Mother punishes her child Child stops crying when pain is gone After that tear begins to flow on Silently from mother's eyes

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 8:59:00 AM

I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix BL. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/16/2011 4:51:00 PM

Many many thanks for your sweet inspiring comment. Good night. bl

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/16/2011 7:50:00 AM

touching write bl... being a mother i know how true this is...it sometimes feels like we punish ourselves when we punish our children....great expression....thanks for sharing.....smiles...chiquita

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2011 10:50:00 AM

Thanks for your nice comment on my write. Sorry for late to give thanks.

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/15/2011 9:51:00 PM

Yes, poignant. Perhaps play with forms to hone your obvious skills.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2011 10:51:00 AM

Thanks, for your comment. I am late to thank you, sorry.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 3:41:00 PM

Poignant and touchy expressions, devnath

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2011 10:53:00 AM

Sorry for giving thanks lately. I was busy. Excuse me. bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2011 2:27:00 PM

BL, although I have no children, I'm sure parents feel worse than their children do after punishment is imposed. Very powerful message here and a sad, poignant image. Love, Carolyn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2011 10:54:00 AM

Sorry for giving you thanks, lately. bl