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I could buy you a present And it could go one way or the other But, I know a bouquet of flowers Will make you a happy Mother I was going to send this to my Mom But for some reason it didn't sound "Quiet right" .....and due to the restrictive number of characters on the card I settled for this ... Violets are blue And roses are red So, I'm sending you Colorful Tulips instead. Ha!

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Date: 5/9/2024 10:41:00 AM
LOL! I prefer tulips, myself!
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Date: 5/9/2024 8:31:00 AM
Hell Jerry, I loved the internal struggle between the easy, expected gesture (flowers) and the unspoken truth is powerful. "Quiet right" perfectly captures that yearning for a deeper expression. The card's limitations made smile and leave me wanting to know more. Very Well Done! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/9/2024 5:44:00 AM
very cute.Enjoyed it. Happy Mother's Day to your moma..
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