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Mothers Day

Mothers day She gave birth from a smoke filled womb the umbilical chord around my neck eternity choked tossed into a world of loneliness discarded garbage my mind slowly rots away bitterness ebbs and flows in my garden of flowers

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/17/2022 3:22:00 AM

May the sublime fragrance the flowers of your garden then heal negativity ~ enjoyed your powerfully written poem, av

Michael Tor

Date: 5/30/2022 9:09:00 AM

Heartfelt and emotional piece Arthur. Life is not easy in this fallen world we live in. Hope you are well and hanging in there...

Valsa George

Date: 5/27/2022 6:13:00 AM

Hope you didn't find the umbilical chord a noose .... ! However it is true that we are flung into an unfriendly and hostile world . Life sometimes becomes a struggle. But it becomes meaningful in proportion to the effort we take to make the heap of garbage into a flowering garden. Powerful poem. Thanks for your visit to my page, Arthur !

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/9/2022 9:01:00 AM

WoW! Arthur, You have penned such a deep and thought-provoking “ Mother's Day” poems. It always good to see you posting. Have a good day:-) Alexis

Len Gasun

Date: 5/9/2022 5:40:00 AM

Such a beautiful mother's day poem this is dear friend. When me and my other siblings were born our mom kept our umbilical chords for remembrance. After reading your poem, i wished mine was tossed up into the world too. Thanks for sharing this awesome write. I love it especially the ending. God bless you always. Hugs