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Mothers Betrayal

as i look into my eyes i slip into a black abyss all i know is we're apart so i just reminisce I see your face in my mind when i shut my eyes lay, wake, night after night visions of you and i she built a wall but i stand tall she never contemplated that my love for you my life, my world could not be jaded the time will come someday and then you'll see the truth in me just me for me how it was she divided us one by one and made us three.....

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Date: 1/24/2010 11:17:00 AM
Interesting write that I see here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup. Sara
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Date: 1/23/2010 11:31:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets ... continue to share your creative writings with us all.. this poem should be entered in the BETRAYAL CONTEST posted on your blue bar reading "contests" ... very appropriate to enter so check it out... thankxxx for sharing...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/23/2010 7:20:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michael. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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