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Motherland… I am a desert, barren and hot. Hoping for the rain, which I forgot. Once, I was green, golden, and bright. Nightingales singing night after night. My fresh breeze at dawn was ever nice, Showered me blossoms like paradise. Year after year, I dressed up in green. Green and reddish with white in between. Until I became older than old, All I have now is darkness and cold. I lost all of my glory and youth, Hope death is not the end or the truth. I had so many kings that were tall, Now, I am filled with filth that they crawl. Tired of being a desert that’s old, Thousands and thousands of years to be told. Cyrus and Darius lived within me. Now I am barren; how could it be? I am now desert far from the sea; They burned my soul so no one can see. Empty and lonely, thirsty and dry, hope for the rain and generous sky. Hope for someone to answer my cry, Wash up my tears, and don’t let me die. I need a hero like the old times, Come and wash me from all the crimes. Come to me, my love, my lovely rain, shower me with love, get rid of pain. If you come back and shower me, fine promise I give you, I'll drink your wine. For me, rain is love; love is my life. To live without love is endless strife. I want to become a jungle of love, making love and being free as a dove. I am now dying, dying of thirst, Hope for a drizzle; first thing is first. 1/28/20 Haloo Note: Motherland is Iran, the birthplace of civilizations, a country with thousands of years of history. In the past forty years, there is a great tension between the government of Iran and the United States. This tension has escalated recently to the point of an imminent war between the two countries. The people in Iran are suffering from an authoritarian government on one side and sanctions and pressure on the other. This humble piece is written to give you the understanding that under a millimeter of skin, we’re all the same, the same humans, and humanities are the same regardless of religion, culture, and geographical background.

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Date: 4/13/2022 9:38:00 PM
A heart rending cry of a land once peaceful, prosperous and rich, now gone barren with internal and external conflicts ! The poem so touchingly emphasizes the need for the rejuvenating showers of love to make it once more fecund ! Beautiful write, dear friend !
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/8/2022 4:39:00 PM
You are so very nice... Thank you...
Date: 7/5/2021 10:50:00 AM
Pashang, I love Come to me my love, my lovely rain, shower me with love, get rid of pain. Beautiful heartfelt words. Yes we are all the same people..same humans..same humanity regardless of our differences. Lead with love. Blessings and belated congratulations on your lovely poem. Susan :)
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Date: 8/8/2022 4:38:00 PM
My dear Susan Being out of your motherland for so many years is very painful... Thank you
Date: 4/17/2020 12:11:00 PM
A beautiful write, Pashang! Iran does indeed have a glorious history! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with the Soup family and best to you as you continue your poetical journey. Many thanks for your kind comments re Cletus O'Toole's Encounter with the Bildet - Bob
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/18/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Robert... sorry for the delay...
Date: 4/12/2020 5:55:00 AM
Pashang Salehi, Beautiful poem, you have here. Elegantly written. Congrats on POTD. I hope all is well, Stay safe. JC Hawkens
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/18/2020 1:32:00 PM
Thanks JC... sorry for the delay... being old has its own problems.
Date: 3/20/2020 4:44:00 PM
Well written and timely. You have planted 1 tree for peace, hope others will follow suit. We tend to think less of war under the shade of a tree with a cool head. Long may your posts continue. Best regards David in NZ
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/26/2020 1:48:00 AM
Thank you David... You are so kind.
Date: 2/29/2020 11:11:00 AM
A strong piece here Pashang.. I felt there was allegory at the start; it has great soul that Speaks deeply to me, what more can I say? But well done with this well presented piece.!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/26/2020 1:47:00 AM
Hi Joe, nice to hear from you, my friend...
Date: 2/28/2020 9:44:00 PM
The emotional plea of your passionate poem moves me to the depths of my being, Pashang. A masterwork of profound poetry. It's so sad the suffering imposed upon many by others. In my prayers, I ask why does it have to be this way? I hope the Motherland is graced by generous skies and her thirst quenched soon, my friend. Belated congrats for a worthy POTD as well. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/26/2020 1:46:00 AM
Thank you Susan... You are so nice.
Date: 2/13/2020 1:24:00 PM
Sad, well penned sadness. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 2/14/2020 1:30:00 PM
Thank you ML, you are so kind...
Date: 2/11/2020 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Pashang. Well penned.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/14/2020 1:29:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 2/7/2020 10:53:00 PM
The eloquence and beauty of imagery with which you brought to light the travail of Iran, is quite impacting. Congratulations on POTD!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/14/2020 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn, you are so kind...
Date: 2/4/2020 2:57:00 AM
You have made your point, Pashang. A mission statement so apt...lots of messages in the poem, truly a work of art.
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Date: 2/4/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Harry... that was the whole point... You are a great friend...
Date: 2/1/2020 2:40:00 PM
wow, what a powerful poem about your motherland. Amazing and congrats on a well deserved POTD.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2020 12:02:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Andrea; thank you.
Date: 2/1/2020 6:48:00 AM
Great write, Pashang. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/2/2020 12:02:00 AM
Thank you Charles.
Date: 1/31/2020 10:27:00 PM
Nice piece, congrats on POTD
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2020 12:01:00 AM
Thank you Jamad...
Date: 1/31/2020 6:05:00 PM
Very nicely penned Pashang, Congrats on POTD
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2020 12:01:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend.
Date: 1/31/2020 5:52:00 PM
This passionate emotional poetic rendering brought tears to my eyes and a lump in my throat. It has such beauty, spoken softly yet with resolve. How fitting that it is honored with POTD Pashang! This magnificent poem is going into my Faves! Congratulations on your honor. I thank you for sharing your information too. xxoo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2020 12:00:00 AM
I am moved by your sweet compliment... Have a wonderful year...
Date: 1/31/2020 1:45:00 PM
- I've just googled nature in Iran ... amazing ... from magnificent beaches stretching for miles to mysterious arid deserts ... many beautiful valleys ... The art, the music, the architecture ... - You've written a powerful poem , a prayer to your people Pashang - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:58:00 PM
Indeed is beautiful... I hope one day can you some of the places that I still remember... Thank you my dear.
Date: 1/31/2020 11:55:00 AM
Powerfully penned pashang, and the poet's notes show a situation not just in Iran but in many places worldwide and so true we are all the same regardless of our ethnicity and belief. A very well deserved POTD and its so lovely to see another different member honoured same names get it all too often:-( hugs Jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:57:00 PM
Pleased you enjoyed, my dear Jan; thank you...
Date: 1/31/2020 11:18:00 AM
wonderful penning Pashang...i can see why this made POTD... congratulations! hugs
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Date: 2/1/2020 11:55:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 1/31/2020 9:43:00 AM
I like how you wrote this...like a desert wishing rain...Congratulations Pashang on POTD
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:54:00 PM
Thank you for reading and liking this...
Date: 1/31/2020 9:21:00 AM
The problem is the media and how it portrays the conflict.. which leads some to believe all are each other's enemies...A region full of history and culture, which will never be destroyed.. Congrats on potd..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:54:00 PM
I hope you are right... Thank you my friend.
Date: 1/31/2020 9:04:00 AM
We all bleed red...sad days for sisters & brothers of Mother Earth...hopefully, your poetic message can shed some light and love...Congrats!! on POTD!!! Pashang...We poets must make it better...^WW^ :o)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:52:00 PM
Indeed my friend... Thank you for reading and liking this humble piece.
Date: 1/31/2020 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Heidi...
Date: 1/31/2020 7:50:00 AM
Hi Pashang, a wonderful write, congratulations on been honoured with POTD today. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:42:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer...
Date: 1/31/2020 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations Pashang on your POTD honor. So very nice to see you here
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/1/2020 11:41:00 PM
Thank you, Sir...
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