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Motherhood

A newborn is placed…. tenderly in your arms Instantly you are mesmerized…. by their sweet charms The intense pain of birth…. instantly melts away Replaced by euphoria…. that is hard to keep at bay Blessed to behold…. one of life’s greatest treasures Nothing before now…. compares or measures Your priorities have shifted…. in a subtle natural way Unspoken promise to…. cherish and protect every day A brand new human…. that you will shape and guide A new mother you have become…. fills you with joyous pride

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Date: 3/13/2024 12:28:00 PM
What a delightful expressive moment you describe, Cecilia...a mother charmed, captivated by the gift of life! Becoming a father is life-changing, but becoming a mother is that and much more! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/10/2024 9:09:00 AM
You have described the journey of motherhood really well here... It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 3/1/2024 11:42:00 PM
It is pretty incredible. It’s a pleasure to watch a new mom fall in love with her baby. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 3/1/2024 8:50:00 AM
Clever and at the same time heart-breaking. Mothers are the best.
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Date: 3/1/2024 1:14:00 AM
What emotions shared here Cecilia. Just pure love for your baby...
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/1/2024 5:10:00 AM
Thank you Michael, Hugs
Date: 2/29/2024 6:53:00 PM
Classic portrayal of the 'newborn mother,' Cecilia. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/29/2024 5:02:00 PM
Cecilia, it is so great to see you back. We've missed you and may I say the poem is a masterpiece! Bob H
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/1/2024 5:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Bob, I have missed everyone as well ! Hugs
Date: 2/29/2024 8:43:00 AM
This is a very tender and heartfelt testament to motherhood. It's wonderful how you express the emotion and change in attitude that occurs after childbirth. It's remarkable and your poems examines the transition with such love.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/29/2024 2:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Duke, I was reflecting on the moment each of my 3 sons were placed in my arms. Amazing feeling! Hugs
Date: 2/29/2024 8:01:00 AM
Dear Cecilia, Your poem touched me deeply because I watch my wife and daughters have children and watch them grow. It beautifully captures the transformative journey of embracing motherhood, from the overwhelming love at first sight to the profound responsibility of shaping a new life. Your words reflect the tender emotions and unspoken promises of welcoming a newborn. This is a heartfelt piece that celebrates the joys and challenges of motherhood. - Blessings, Daniel
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/29/2024 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, it is a amazing feeling when a baby in placed in your arms for the first time. I was blessed with 3 sons. Hugs

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