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Mother Pelican Bleeds

three starving children... ripping flesh loose from her breast she does what it takes *Louisiana State Flag Tim Ryerson 7/18/2015

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Date: 8/9/2015 11:31:00 PM

Great to know about your national pride Tim! Congrats on big win!

Date: 8/9/2015 1:58:00 AM

I'd have strruggled to come up with a write on this flag, Tim, but yours is an absolute belter, and done in Senryu. Triff. Well done. Regards, Viv

Date: 8/8/2015 10:49:00 PM

TIM, Congratulations on your Flag win....... SKAT

Date: 8/8/2015 8:24:00 PM

Stark picture. congratulations Tim

Date: 7/27/2015 9:06:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations on your awesome win. every poem has been an honor to read. Love LINDA

Date: 7/24/2015 10:53:00 PM

OH MY, a sad one!! It's the most interesting one I have seen yet. Congrats in the contest, my friend.

Date: 7/24/2015 5:54:00 PM

what amazing imagery Tim - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 7/23/2015 10:37:00 PM

Great work Tim! Much said in this haiku, congrats on big win!

Date: 7/23/2015 8:00:00 PM

THANK YOU FOR THIS

Date: 7/21/2015 7:52:00 PM

So nice to read your poetry this evening. Light & Love

Date: 7/19/2015 4:43:00 PM

strong, very much enjoyed this senryu Tim

Date: 7/18/2015 7:14:00 PM

Sweet! that's just we do! Mothers that is Nice imagery, jill