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Mother Nature's Scolding

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**** Winter and spring had a fight. We had 4 inches of snow late last night. The tulips and daffodils are covered in snow. Cold winds and temperatures above zero. Their dear mother said, "You two better play nice!" "Do not cross me or you'll pay the price."

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/6/2022 4:34:00 PM

Looks like our front flower bed two weeks ago, Debra. I love the picture and the lovely rhyming poem. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, Bill

Debra L Brown
Date: 4/6/2022 7:39:00 PM

Thank, Bill for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/1/2022 1:06:00 PM

Fine piece Debra, good imagery and expression. Blessings, Gordon

Debra L Brown
Date: 4/1/2022 1:27:00 PM

Thanks, Gordon, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/1/2022 9:13:00 AM

what a cute write with perfect rhyme. I could see the two seasons battling it out.

Mike Bayles

Date: 3/31/2022 9:32:00 PM

Nice rhyme, Debra.

Debra L Brown
Date: 4/1/2022 12:44:00 PM

Thank, Mike for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/30/2022 4:58:00 PM

See, every mother is not warm and cuddly always, some cold shoulders now and then. Love it! Well done.

Debra L Brown
Date: 4/1/2022 12:49:00 PM

Joe, I enjoyed your comment. Thanks for taking the read the poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo

Date: 3/30/2022 2:03:00 AM

Wonderful, as only Mother Debra could deliver. A FAVE! SHALOM SHALOM IN Jesus who created IT

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/31/2022 10:18:00 AM

Anil, I very humbled you chose this poem as your favorite. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/29/2022 5:31:00 PM

Those naughty, naughty seasons! lol. How could they conspire against such pretty flowers...This is such a fun write, Debra. Kudos, Gershon

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 6:14:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon, for your comment. Mother Nature certainly has her hands full with her kids. (Lol) Thanks for seeing the humor. Blessings ~ Debra

John Watt

Date: 3/29/2022 2:48:00 PM

Debra, I love your imagery and the clever thought of winter and spring like fighting siblings with their mother saying "play nice!" Blessings ~ John

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 5:14:00 PM

Thanks John, I enjoyed your comment. These days it seems winter and spring needs a time out in the corner (LoL) as were expecting some winter mix in the next day or two. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2022 1:03:00 PM

A tricky time where the seasons meet and engage in a tug of war. Tom

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 5:18:00 PM

Thanks, Tom, for your comment. It reminds me of two kids fighting. That's how I came up with the idea for this poem. Have a good evening. Blessings ~ Debra

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/29/2022 11:39:00 AM

Much worse when Mother Nature snows on one's parade! Aloha!

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 5:23:00 PM

Haha! Mother Nature will take away all their toys and put them in time out. (Lol) Thanks Rico, I enjoyed your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2022 10:45:00 AM

Hello Debra Brown, yes winter and spring are having a fight there was snow on the ground, now melted. I heard we are going to have freezing rain. It is cold outside feels like winter. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2022 10:22:00 AM

Hello Debbie, In cold temHugs.ps no flowers can grow. Wewill have to wait for warmer weather. Hugs.

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 5:46:00 PM

Hi! Darlene, Thanks for taking the time out to comment. It's cold here to we are expecting some bad weather this week. I'm not sure if my daffodils will live as it was down in the teens last night. Have a nice evening. Blessings ~ Debra

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/29/2022 7:05:00 AM

Debra, you've written a very sweet piece! Excellent writing, especially the conflict between spring and winter, and the mother's reconciliation.

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 5:52:00 PM

Thank, Sotto for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 3/29/2022 2:07:00 AM

Mother knows best. Winter and spring are still at loggerhead. but soon the weather will improve.

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 4:44:00 AM

Thanks, Victor, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George

Date: 3/28/2022 9:09:00 PM

A very cute write, Debra ! Probably your mother instinct has made you write this ! Really enjoyed the squabble between spring and winter and the mother's mediation....

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/29/2022 4:44:00 AM

Thanks, Valsa, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/28/2022 4:53:00 PM

Great one Debra. The seasons are battling here too :)

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/28/2022 5:34:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/28/2022 4:13:00 PM

A little chuckle! Well done! :)

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/28/2022 5:37:00 PM

Thanks, Kim, I'm happy you found the humor. Blessings ~ Debra