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Mother Nature's Muse

She moves whichever way wind is blowing Her body caught dancing in fire’s blue flames Like shadows in spaces never showing Fluent in language yet to be knowing Remembered only by the seasons claim She moves whichever way wind is blowing Eternal blaze in her body glowing She blushed on both sides that divide the same Like shadows in spaces never showing Mother Nature’s muse in essence growing Embraced in the light of dawn’s careful aim She moves whichever way wind is blowing Cloaked in power spoke about ongoing A lovely blame with insides of false shame Like shadows in spaces never showing Desire is the gift that she’s bestowing The demise of an ethereal dame She moves whichever way wind is blowing Like shadows in spaces never showing August 02, 2019 Villanelle

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Date: 4/22/2021 4:39:00 PM
That is quite the improvement, it flows so much better my friend, Emile.
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Courtney Hubbert
Date: 4/22/2021 4:46:00 PM
I really do appreciate your help. What would I do without you my friend. Thanks again.
Date: 4/18/2021 2:01:00 PM
I welcome feedback. I'd love to hear from you. Drop me a comment...or two.
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Courtney Hubbert
Date: 4/22/2021 2:51:00 PM
Okay Emile, I have edited the poem so that now each line has 10 syllables. I hope I did it right. I really did appreciate your help. It is always welcome.

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