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Mother Nature

The sky opened up, tree branches blew by swiflty, the surf was rising, hurricane winds, ferocious, earth and sky having a fight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/30/2010 5:51:00 PM
Very nice personifcation, Susan
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:20:00 AM
Very impressive write with nice images of the Mother nature
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Date: 8/27/2010 3:07:00 PM
You describe the hurricane well, Susan. Do you live in the South? We haven't been hit by one yet this year, but when these storms arrive id does seem like the earth and sky are having a fight. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/27/2010 2:58:00 PM
Lovely creative wwrite Susan.. hope u will enter some of the contests posted on the contest page .. a sure way to have your poetry noticed and read more frequently..luv.. happy weekend..
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