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Mother

How can I say that you are amazing? How can I describe your kindness? Should I add est to the word and say amazingest? No...that's too weird and too simple They say admiring is stronger than loving But you are worth more than admiration And if could make up a word to describe you It would be no other than true-mother Why do you put your kids first And leave yourself behind for later? Spending mornings and evenings working Tiring yourself so that they can have the best from you Love and care can be seen in your eyes Passion and motherly kindness can be heard in our voice And we,your children,are so ungrateful,so carefree But you hug us in your warm tender arms Mother

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Date: 7/23/2016 10:01:00 AM
Aimee,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/23/2016 9:46:00 AM
Aimee, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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