Mother

How can I say to you, The feeling I have for you, How I can......The word seems to me fluttered, Whenever I started speaking to you, You are like rose, You are like fragrance, You are my everything, Oh my mother,How can I say to you, The feeling which I have for you.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2016 11:24:00 PM

Nice to see this one again, Asnan..LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 10:58:00 PM

HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK SOON..2016

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2015 11:59:00 PM

Asnan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/6/2015 12:52:00 AM

this is beautiful, Asnan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT