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The  one who was always dearest to me                                                                                                                                But now you are slowly killing me.Words like arrows you shoot to my heart .                                                                                                                           And I am slowly falling apart.                                                                                                                            MOTHER,You carried me and gave life to me and yet you cannot let me be.                                                                                                                      Everything I do is always wrong,yet my love for you still remains strong.                                                                                                                           MOTHER,I have found love and one so true,but somehow he does not conform to you.                                                                                                                               You drive him away,you drive me away with cruel and vicious things you say.                                                                                                                               MOTHER,I am a person on my own,God only gave me to you on loan.                                                                                                                              If you look into my heart you'll see,a daughter who is true unto thee.

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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:04:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:10:00 AM
    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Abegail. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 3:19:00 AM
    Poignant write Abegail! Such it is with mothers when they think they are about to lose their daughters. The irony is that is actually what they end up doing due to their strangle-hold. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:48:00 AM
    Abegail, a piece from your heart.. I hope you share this with your mom maybe she will understand you better.. Welcome to Poetrysoup :) all the best Wilma