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Most Peculiar

I just sat and watched the ocean by myself Even I don't mind cooking You can laugh yes You're forgiven But I am no longer frightened To be living Sense that I'm no loner No more pain No more sorrow Sense that I'm no loner I'll make it through tomorrow Sense that I'm no loner It'll be torture and bliss Sense that I'm no loner Better like this Here is my heart Feel the power Look at me I am flower You can laugh yes You're forgiven But I no longer frightened To be living Sense I'm no loner No more pain No more sorrow Sense that I'm no loner I'll make it through tomorrow Sense that I'm no loner It'll be torture and bliss Sense that I'm no loner Better like this

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/12/2019 7:00:00 AM

Great repetition. “It will be torture and bliss”

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/30/2019 7:41:00 PM

"But I'm no longer frightened to be living" sometimes it takes a while to reach that point, after many sunsets alone. Very nice, Matt.

Phatt Matt
Date: 6/30/2019 11:28:00 PM

Hi Becca thanks I thought of a cheer up rendition of things. Very nice to hear from you. I try to reach the lonely souls in the world and tell them they are not alone. Thanks Becca